**Verdict: REVISE.** I opened every file you listed, plus `STYLE.md`, `sheet.jpg` and `kit_sheet.png`. Image coordinates are in displayed pixels. Your own fix list is excluded.

**1. Thatch reads as cardboard, not reed** (`revision_0/renders/thatch_panel.png`, whole slab; `revision_0/test_house.png`, cottage roof ~1290–1500, 790–1000)
- The slab is a 0.30 m block with fine wavy vertical corrugation on every face. It looks like corrugated board.
- On the cottage roof it becomes a flat, saturated orange diamond pattern with a hot specular streak at ~1380, 850.
- Reference sheet F shows muted straw with horizontal courses and a heavy, shaggy edge.
- Acceptance:
  - Roof-face courses run horizontally, about 8–12 per metre, with no vertical streaking.
  - Colour is desaturated straw/grey-brown, with HSV saturation at most about 0.45.
  - Roughness is high, with no visible specular streak.
  - The thatch roof reads as thicker than the tile roof in the test render.

**2. Pillory canopy and chains don't match the sheet or work as built** (`revision_0/renders/pillory.png`, canopy ~330–390, 60–190; chains ~335–385, 425–500)
- Sheet G shows an open lantern of slim ribs and tracery.
- The render has a solid cone studded with large black thorn-like spikes. The spikes read as a spiked club and are far too big for the scale.
- Chains and rings hang beside the shaft, not from it. The ring at ~340, 490 and the ones at ~375, 480 float in air, with no staple or collar.
- Acceptance:
  - Each chain's first link touches an iron staple on the shaft face, with at most 5 mm gap.
  - Crockets are small: under 0.12 m tall and no more than 3 per ring of the cone.
  - The pillory still reads as a pillory in the runtime view.

**3. `chimney_cluster` is three grey pipes, not a rich stack** (`revision_0/renders/chimney_cluster.png`; compare sheet D left)
- The sheet shows brick shafts with diamond lattice and crowned tops on a broad base.
- The render has three identical grey octagonal shafts with white mortar lines that look like bands. Caps are a small bulge with a hole.
- The shafts are very tall and thin against the base: about 1:7 shaft width to height.
- The unbroken grey makes it look like a different kit from the stone base.
- Acceptance:
  - `Brick_old` (or a brick tone) on at least the shafts.
  - Shafts differ in height by at least 0.3 m, and each top has a visibly wider corbel or crown.
  - One shaft carries a diamond or chevron pattern, done in texture, not geometry.
  - Shaft width is at least 1:5 of its height.

**4. `dormer_hipped` roof is a plain pyramid** (`revision_0/renders/dormer_hipped.png`, roof ~180–515, 190–430; compare sheet C left and `dormer_wall.png`'s tiled roof)
- The sheet shows a flared, bell-cast conical roof with shingle courses and a ball under the spike.
- The render's roof has no tile courses and no flare, unlike the tiled `dormer_wall` roof, so the two are inconsistent.
- The side cheek is a blank orange plane about 60% of the width, and the window fills only the front face.
- Acceptance:
  - Roof uses the tile texture with visible courses, matching `dormer_wall`.
  - Eaves flare out at least 4° or 0.06 m, and the finial gets a ball.
  - A frame or corner post breaks up the cheek.
  - Stays under 2.5k triangles.

**5. Small roof and sign atoms read as the wrong thing at runtime** (`runtime_all.png`, louvre at ~760–850, 830–910; `sign_key` at ~735, 715)
- The louvre looks like a little table with a roof, with four legs and a solid roof. It shows no slatted openings, unlike sheet D bottom right.
- `sign_key` is a black ring-and-key silhouette on bare iron, with no board or colour. The other signs carry painted boards. It reads as a ring, not a key sign.
- I judged these only from the all-atoms view and did not open the individual `louvre_ridge` and `sign_key` renders. Treat both as likely issues to confirm.
- Acceptance:
  - Louvre shows at least 4 slat openings per long side, with its sides closed down to ridge height.
  - `sign_key` has a `Sign_paint` board or a golden-key tint, so it stays legible at 1 m on screen.

**Scope check.** Triangle counts look in budget: `runtime_all.png` shows 23,248 total against the 45k limit. Shelf look, materials and silhouettes are otherwise close to the reference kit. The well, the doors, the chimney base and the `dormer_wall` gable are the strongest pieces. Nothing here needs geometry beyond budget. Items 1 and 3 are mostly texture work.